Saturday, May 5, 2012

Once Again


This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 27; the 27th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'Once Again'.

Our love we might get battered
Our hearts we might get shattered,
Yet our desire never goes weak
Once again love is all we seek.

Our future might look bleak
Our will power might get weak,
Yet we strive for our right
Once again we stand up and fight.

Our dreams might get broken
Our thoughts might get frozen,
Yet our goals still remain
Once again in life we reign.

Our plans when we think are so strong
Our plans when they go all wrong,
Yet we just don’t stand there and wait
Once again we get ready to face our fate.

Our finances might not be so sound
Our vision might not take off the ground,
Yet we take what comes unplanned
Once again stand firm and take a stand.

Our loved ones who we lost someday
Our friends who we let go astray,
Yet in our hearts they still remain
And we just want to see them, Once Again. 


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31 comments:

viva_andya said...

cute poem.. ATB

vajra said...

Nice one AB.Very rhythmic and swingy like a song..

Ashish Bathini said...

Thanks for the comments guys :)

aativas said...

Nice one with positive message.

Ashish Bathini said...

@Aativas Thank you.

Kappu said...

//Our loved ones who we lost someday
Our friends who we let go astray,
Yet in our hearts they still remain
And we just want to see them, Once Again. //

SO true! Nice post!

Ashish Bathini said...

@Kappu thanks for the comment, means a lot.

N.S.Kirti said...

Nice poem Ashish, the essence of 'once again' is well captured :)
i loved these two lines-
Yet we take what comes unplanned
Once again stand firm and take a stand.

Menachery said...

Wow that was a lovely Poem, i could almost feel myself singing along in my head :) ....

Ashish Bathini said...

@ Kirti Thanks, glad you liked it.

Ashish Bathini said...

@Menachery Thank you, feels good :)

The Fool said...

Nice poetry. And you managed rhyme scheme pretty well.

Ashish Bathini said...

@ TF: Thanks man

Harsha Chittar said...

Very nice poem I appreciate your effort to rhyme, well done.

Ashish Bathini said...

@ harsha TY, glad you liked it.

Nasia said...

Well written!

Ashish Bathini said...

@Nasia thanks a lot

Debosmita said...

Nice poem. I like the sound of it - more a song than a poem. ATB for BAT :)

Ashish Bathini said...

@Debosmitha thanks for those kind words, means a lot.

Dewdrop said...

Beautifully put !

Ashish Bathini said...

@Dewdrops Glad that you liked it

clouds said...

Wow....nice one ! i really liked it very much.specially d last para....:)
Good luck for BAT.

Ashish Bathini said...

@clouds means a lot, thanks

Richi Baidwan said...

Each word is a reflection of many of our daily lives put together. We often face challenges, overcome some while others overcome us yet we stand up, dust off our clothes and walk ahead...

Would definitely drop by for some more...all the best for BAT!

Dishit D said...

nice one... made it a bit practical by including the finance thing :P

Dreamer said...

Simple and eloquent!

Kappu said...

My comments on your winning! -

@Kirti, Ashish and Nil - whoa!! Congratulations guys!
Your write ups on the just-crippled girl and her emotions, poem on how we deal with things once again and the lovely dialogue between the gardener/little missus has NOT failed!! ;)

SO happy for your guys!

Cheers! Do stop by my blog - Kappu!

Ashish Bathini said...

@ Richi, Dishit, Dreamer and Kappu

Thanks guys, means a lot when you hear good things about yourself esp from other bloggers :)

Harshita Srivastava said...

Beautiful Creation :)

Ashish Bathini said...

Thanks Harshita

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